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Silmarillion Awards – Vote for the Wisest Counselor

Welcome back to the second phase of the 2017 Silmarillion Awards! Last week was a barrelful of fun* as your nominations came pouring in. So many worthy characters were named, so many marvelous fantasy novels were discussed. Are your TBR piles toppling over yet? Mine is definitely reaching its tipping point!

*A barrelful of dwarves, that is! . . . Ahem, that was supposed to be a vague Barrels out of Bond reference.

We’ve tallied up the nominations and seconds (and thirds and fourths and fifths and so on), and only the top five characters in each category have moved into the voting round. If you missed the first round of action, here’s the infographic Deborah made:

As you can see, the voting period is open from today, July 10th, until Friday, July 14th. So be sure to make your way around to all the blogs to read about the top five contenders in each category. And there’s another reason you’ll want to visit everyone: there’s an epic scavenger hunt taking place!

Each of the ten blogs will include the phrase of a poem somewhere in their posts. It’s your job to gather all ten phrases (in the correct order!) and submit them in the voting form. Doing so will enter you into a giveaway for the Grand Prize! I don’t know about you, but that map of Middle Earth, One Ring, and copy of Aratar, Peredhil, and Halflings, Oh My! look delightful.
This is your first stop along the scavenger hunt, and here is the phrase you’ll want to write down:

Three great jewels (though for our purposes, ten)

Then click on the text to head to your second stop.
While we’re talking about giveaways, congratulations to Athelas H. for winning the one hosted here during the nomination phase! You’ve won a paperback copy of Alora: The Wander Jewel by Tamie Dearen and e-book copies of Evangeline, Eun Na and the Phantom, and Foxtails by Erica Laurie. Athelas, the email address you submitted in the Rafflecopter didn’t work, so please send Jenelle an email at Jenelle.L.Schmidt [at] gmail [dot] com. She’ll make sure your prize gets to you!
All right! Now to the moment you’ve all been scrolling down for! Drumroll, please . . .

The top five nominations for the Wisest Counselor Silmaril are:

Puddleglum from The Silver Chair by C.S. Lewis: This gloomy Marsh-Wiggle may expect the worst in any given situation, but he’s actually more cheerful than his pessimistic kin. His common sense and steadfast presence keep his young friends on track even in the darkest of times. A bit of a “wet blanket,” he is nevertheless prepared for rain and ruin. Which, when you’re on a quest of great import, is a good quality to have.

Professor Hamilton from Dragons in Our Midst by Bryan Davis: A man of stalwart faith and honorable lineage, this teacher is a mentor in every sense of the word. His sound advice provides a staying anchor and a guiding rudder for those under his care, even going so far as to affect their eternities. Not only does he offer wisdom, but he is a living example of those unshakeable convictions in action. His friends would do well to follow in his footsteps.

Prince of Farthestshore (a.k.a. Aethelbald) from Tales of Goldstone Wood by Anne Elisabeth Stengl: Kind. Strong. Faithful. True. Those are just a few words to describe Prince Aethelbald. He is relentless in his pursuit of those he loves. He doesn’t look the part of a Prince Charming, but there is far more to him than what meets the eye. And while you may not always want to hear what he has to say, it never fails to be exactly what you need.

Beana from Tales of Goldstone Wood by Anne Elisabeth Stengl: Beana isn’t who you would expect to be a voice of wisom. In fact, she’s a stubborn goat. (Though she may also be something more.) But her stouthearted courage, foresight, and protectiveness are precisely the traits a wise counselor needs. Being centuries old doesn’t hurt, either. Whether you need a shoulder to cry on or a bit of tough love, Beana will be there.

Albus Dumbledore from Harry Potter by J.K. Rowling: Albus Dumbledore is quite possibly the most powerful wizard the world has ever seen. If he plays his cards close to the vest, it is only because he loves the young people in his charge and would spare them pain if he could. A bit eccentric and secretive, Dumbledore is definitely someone you want on your side, whether you need a powerful wizard or some kind words of encouragement.

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Whew! That’s quite the impressive list from which to pick! Who will you vote for? (Be sure to hit submit when you’re done.) And don’t forget to click on the first line of that poem and embark on that scavenger hunt!

Feel free to discuss everything in the comments! Which characters you’re torn between (all of them, right?), who you end up voting for and why, and whether you’ll cast the One Ring into the fire if you win it.

Silmarillion Awards – Wisest Counselor Nominations

Hear ye, hear ye! The second annual Silmarillion Awards begins today!

What are the Silmarillion Awards, you might be wondering? You might remember when I hosted the Best Riddling and Poetry Silmaril last year, but if not, let me give you a rundown.
They’re like the Oscars for fantasy characters, voted for by you. This is a fun way to show your favorite characters your love and support! Of course, since Lord of the Rings is widely accepted as a standard of excellence in this genre, each award is presented by someone from Middle Earth. This means that you cannot nominate or vote for a LOTR character. But anyone else within the realm of fantasy is fair game!
And what kind of awards, pray tell, will be handed out? Well, the lineup is new and improved (since a couple of categories last year veered into spoiler territory), and it looks more exciting than ever!
infographic designed by Deborah O’Carroll
Your first step, once you finish reading this post, is to head to all the blogs and start making nominations!
Wisest Counselor Silmaril – Tracey @ Adventure Awaits

The Rules:

  • You can nominate as many characters for each award as you like.
  • You may “second” as many characters as you like. (An example of seconding: someone might nominate Susan Pevensie for an award, and if you agree, you can second the nomination.)
  • Please mention which book/series each nomination is from!
  • You may not nominate and then second your own recommendation. (At this stage of the awards, you can nominate and second as many characters as you want, but you still get only one vote per character.)
  • Authors can gladly participate, but they may not nominate/second any of their own characters. However, they are welcome to let their readers know about these awards and may suggest characters to their own readers that could be nominated for various awards.
  • The awards are for fantasy characters only. Sorry, Katniss Everdeen–you’re from a dystopian series.
  • These are lifetime awards! Last year’s winners are now ineligible.
  • Again, because Tolkien characters are the standard for the awards, they are also ineligible. (As one of the Silmarillion Awards hosts put it, having Gandalf present an award to himself would be awkward.)
  • Use #SilmAwards2017 when talking about or promoting the awards on social media!
This year is going to be even more fun than last year! For one thing, there is a smorgasbord of giveaways, and also an upcoming scavenger hunt. For another thing, you can now buy mugs and t-shirts! The proceeds will go to cover the costs of prizes for the giveaways.
Speaking of giveaways, before I get into the particular award I’m hosting here on Adventure Awaits, why don’t you check out this giveaway? a Rafflecopter giveaway (If my attempts to embed it into the post don’t work, please just click the link.) You could win these four books!
paperback copy of Alora: The Wander-Jewel by Tamie Dearen + ebook copies
of Evangeline, Eun Na and the Phantom, and Foxtails by Erica Laurie
The top five characters with the most nominations/seconds in each category will move on to the voting round next week!
If you have any questions at all, don’t hesitate to ask.

Let the Wisest Counselor nominations begin!

As you have seen, I will be hosting the Wisest Counselor Silmaril. This award should go to a character who exhibits maturity regardless of age. Someone whose advice is sound and whose counsel is timely. This kind of character is often instrumental in helping the protagonist(s) achieve their goal, although their words may not always be what the hero wants to hear. This character holds fast to truth and imparts it to others. He or she is not necessarily perfect, but they provide an example to be followed. Without their sage counsel, many a quest would end in tragedy, and many a hero would make unfortunate decisions. We owe quite a few happy endings to this wise sort of character, indeed.
Last year’s winner of the Wisest Counselor Silmaril was Aslan himself. (Check out the award ceremony here.) Just like last year, Gandalf will be presenting this award to the winner. I think we can all agree that these fellows of Middle Earth are two of the most iconic counselors in the history of fantasy! And Aslan was definitely a worthy first winner!
(Remember, Gandalf, Elrond, and Aslan are ineligible to receive this award.)

Now it is up to you to nominate who you think is the wisest counselor in fantasy! Nominations are open from today (July 3rd) until Friday, July 7th! Be sure to stop by each of the participating blogs this week to get those nominations in for every category. Happy nominating!

Subplots and Storylines – June 2017

What ho, questing June bugs! I’m pretty sure June was struck by lightning when the particle accelerator exploded, because it went by in a flash.*

*Ahem. Lame reference to The Flash show. I couldn’t resist. Also I have no idea why you are June bugs today. I had coffee this morning, so I guess you have my cup of joe to thank for the offbeat humor.

Happy Canada 150, by the way, to all my fellow Canadians!
(graphic made by little sis, lostfairy)

It’s crazy! We just flipped the calendar page yesterday, didn’t we? And now we have to flip it again? I’m constantly amazed at just how much can transpire in just thirty days.

The month started off with Rooglewood Press announcing their fourth and final fairy tale retelling contest: Five Poisoned Apples! I have yet to develop even a sliver of an idea, but I would love to enter later on this year. That cover is drop dead gorgeous. A few friends of mine are starting to work on some seriously incredible entries too, from what I’ve heard.

Some of my college classmates and I spoke at an elementary school chapel, even though college is over by now. It was supposed to be our teacher’s thing, but we students had come up with the lesson before grad, so some of us decided to participate anyway, even though we weren’t required to be there. Lots of fun! The best part was an object lesson involving blenders.

Afterwards, I spent the day catching up with a dear friend. Pizza in the park, rants about the trials of customer service, smoothies, and a heart to heart = my kind of outing.

I somehow managed to lose my voice, but just for a day. A stupid cold lingered all during the month of May, but then it came back over a weekend this June–a weekend I was working, a weekend the store had a big sale . . . so that means trying to talk to lots of customers. The old folks couldn’t hear me, one guy asked if my voice always sounded like that or did I have a cold, and several ladies gave me tips to get rid of it (tea, sleep, a cold drink–I think she meant alcohol??–vitamins, honey, etc.). All in all it was quite amusing, although manning the till was not a good idea.

Later in the month we threw a belated party for my mom’s birthday! I haven’t planned or hosted a party in ages, but it ended up a success anyway, and we had the perfect weather for eating outdoors.

Father’s Day also happened–rather low key this year, but still very good.

This week I took my middle sister to the city for a girls day out. We spent over an hour in a bookstore (I bought The Penderwicks by Jeanne Birdsall and Some Kind of Happiness by Claire Legrand–thank you for the recs, my Goodreads friends! I can’t wait to read these summery slices of goodness) . . . went for pizza . . . explored walking trails in the park because when it smells like rain, it’s the best time for adventures . . . and ended off the day with London fogs and macarons in a cutesy little tea shop while it began pouring outside. A lovely time!

And last but not least, I finally sent in my application for the college I want to go to this fall.

Storylines on the Screen

Once Upon a Time – parts of seasons 2, 3, and 5
Still watching it in three different groups: season 2 with all three siblings, season 3 with my parents and sisters, and season 5 with just my sisters. (I’m reminded of how Neverland is one of the best parts of the show EVER. The character conflict is spot on, and Peter Pan is fantastic.)
Rogue One
My second-ever Star Wars movie–go me! I knew in advance that this would be a feelsy movie. Let’s just say it lived up to those expectations, and maybe even surpassed them. There goes my heart in a million pieces on the floor, guys. Jyn, Cassian, and Bodhi were my favorite characters, so if you’ve seen it, you know why I had to sweep up the pieces! And now I can’t decide whether I like Rogue One or The Force Awakens best.
Beauty and the Beast (2017)
I rewatched it with my whole family. It didn’t make me cry this time, but it was still gorgeous. For more thoughts, visit Subplots and Storylines – April 2017.

Storylines on the Page

The Shadow Throne // Jennifer A. Nielsen

Within fifty pages, I was scared for every single character on the good side. I loved how this book–and the whole Ascendance Trilogy–managed to be witty, intense, and still have a heart. As always, Jaron is full of sass and clever plans. At one point, when asked what he has up his sleeve, he replies, “Catastrophic levels of bad behavior.” And that about sums it up.

Okay, but before I move on, it bears mentioning that while I did predict the twist at the end, I still loved this final instalment! If you’re looking for a romping, sarcastic fantasy adventure with a handful of great plot twists, look no further.

The Reluctant Godfather // Allison Tebo

What a delightful, hilarious take on the Cinderella story! Check out my review for more thoughts.

The Raven King // Maggie Stiefvater

(Apparently all the books I read this month have matching titles!)

I’ve had difficulty reviewing all four books in the Raven Cycle, but this one was the hardest. In The Raven King, there’s a sharp dichotomy between the magical prose and subtle character development (which I adore), and the frequent swearing, elements of the occult, and now homosexuality (which I cannot endorse).

Without spoiling who or what, I’ll just say that one of my favorite characters was ruined by the gay relationship added to the book. It was saddening.

The ending was also kind of anticlimactic after all the buildup, but in a way it was supposed to fall a little flat. And yet because of that, it didn’t fall flat enough for a long enough time, because by the very end it felt like pretty much everything was solved. The sacrifices made didn’t have the lasting consequences I expected. Certain threads weren’t wrapped up satisfactorily, either.

But the things I did like are Blue’s very relatable longings/frustrations, her developing relationship with Gansey, Gansey’s backstory, more explanations for magical things, and the way that Maggie Stiefvater made me feel things without outright telling me what to feel. Her prose, while not quite to the level of the previous three books, is downright amazing. Plus the cover is gorgeous.

In conclusion . . . I don’t really have a conclusion. This book left me feeling something, left me thinking about it long after I closed the cover, which is the mark of an impactful book. Now if only I could figure out just what kind of impact it had.

(for a few more thoughts, including some spoilers, check out my Goodreads review)

Storylines on My Own Pages

This was the month I planned to add 50,000 words to The Brightest Thread! To keep myself on track, I logged my progress both in words and in time spent writing. This month, I spent over 43 hours on TBT and added 29,238 words to the manuscript. This brings it up to 62k . . . not quite what I’d aimed for, but it was still the best writing month I’ve had this year!

I continued going through TBT from start to finish, basically retyping a mix of the very first novella draft and the polished novella draft, while adding in new stuff along the way. Buuuut by the time I reached the end, the story was still only 55k long. So I took half a week to read over what I had so far and gain a wider perspective. And then I jumped right back in, working on some spot cleaning sort of editing here and there, incorporating a few small subplots, etc. That’s where I’m at right now.

I originally wanted to get this novel up to an 80-90k length, but considering how I feel like I’m scraping the bottom of the barrel for ideas at the moment–and considering the fast approaching deadline called Realm Makers–I’m aiming for 70k.

It seems a bit low for the genre, but I’ve been scouring lists of typical industry standard wordcounts. YA, it seems, ranges anywhere from 55-80k, though some lists mention the genre is tending to run longer these days. Fantasy in general ranges from 90-120k. My questions is: what about YA fantasy??? A 70,000-word novel ends up under 300 pages, if I estimated that correctly. And I can’t remember the last time I picked up a fantasy novel that small. However, I think that for the sake of having something to pitch at the conference, a 70k novel isn’t bad, and if an agent shows interest but suggests lengthening the book, that can be done at a later date.

(For all of you nonwriters, I’m sorry for the boring stats and wordcounts. Such is the writer life.) (I also apologize for taking longer to reply to comments this month. When I’m focused on something, I’m obsessively focused.)

Anyway, it’s been a very intense month of patchwork writing/editing, and I really, really hope that the result turns out well. It would be nice if I had time to send the story to beta readers before I leave for the conference, but that will have to wait until afterward. In the meantime, my July writing plans are to:

  • write those last 8,000 words
  • do a quick round of editing
  • prepare a pitch (along with written material such as a query letter to hand out)

Farewell to June and hello to July

The first three weeks of July will be full of TBT work and conference prep, and then at last I shall fly to Nevada for Realm Makers!

And here on the blog, I’ll be posting mostly on Mondays instead of Saturdays, because a certain special thing is going on in July, and you all get to be a big part of it!

That’s right, it’s the second annual Silmarillion Awards!

I would explain all the rules here, but this post is getting long enough. Come back on July 3rd, however, and the fun will begin! In the meantime, start thinking of all your favorite fantasy characters!

How was your June? Is it just me, or is summer just flashing by? (Oops, another Flash pun. After finishing the second season last month, I must be suffering withdrawal.) How many of you will I see at Realm Makers? How many of you are pumped for the Silmarillion Awards?!

The Steadfast Pen Blog Launch & Interview!

In my last post I promised a special guest was coming. Well, joining us today is my younger brother, Josiah! He just launched his blog, called The Steadfast Pen, this week. To celebrate his splashdown into the blogosphere, I’m interviewing him about his perspective on creativity and life, two of my main topics here at Adventure Awaits.

You may remember him from Four Elements of a Successful Villain, a guest post he did here over a year ago. Or you may recall that he and I shared college adventures recently. You may also be unable to forget that, ahem, darling picture of him and I dressed as Mario and Princess Peach (featured in S&S May 2017) .

Josiah neglected to give me an official bio for this post, leaving his introduction in my very capable hands. (I’ve known the guy for nineteen years, so I’d like to think I’m an expert at this sort of thing.) Josiah is the creatively inclined, fastidiously detailed, uproariously funny person responsible for many a brainstorming session or Marvel fest in my household. Stories were what paved the way from our squabbling phase of siblinghood to the friendship phase we enjoy now. He’s got a quirky sense of humor, an affinity for puns, and a boatload of patience developed by the trials of having three sisters.

Without further ado, please welcome Josiah Dyck to the stage!



Tracey: Art and life have a way of intersecting. How does your life
influence your art, and how does art influence your life?

Josiah: Interesting question! I think that my life influences my
art—or, more specifically, my writing—in a host of different ways. When I
struggle in life, I can work those struggles into my writing. My story The Tournament of Convicts is a good
example of this. The main character fights against the feeling of never seeing
his dreams come to pass. This is something I’ve had to fight as well, and that
makes it more poignant in the story. Another scenario is for my first book in
The Portal Chronicles. One of my characters, Mark, tries to prove himself
because he wants his parents to be proud of him. I can relate to this, which
strengthens the story’s emotion.

If there are things I’ve wondered and want to work out,
stories are good places to do that. For example, Of Beauties and Beasts toys with the concept of actions and
consequences, especially when said actions were bad, but the intentions were
good. Darkened Slumber deals a lot
with honor and asks if someone can be honorable when they’ve killed someone
else. Maelstrom is going to be
focused on grace versus judgement, especially when people don’t deserve grace.
Being able to figure these things out on the pages of a novel is always a joy
to do in the end.

Through this answer, I think I’ve also partially answered the
second part of this question. By working through the struggles and questions I
have, my art influences my life when I find the answers. Also, when one is a
writer, one pays attention to different things than most people would. I
sometimes try to remember how someone looks so I can incorporate part of them
into a character. I’ll notice quirks, habits, and mannerisms—all worth noting
should I someday want to use them. I could go on, but I think I’ve rambled on
long enough for this question, seeing it’s only the first one.

Tracey: You write, but you also engage in a number of other creative
outlets—both as creator and as an audience member. What creative art forms
influence your writing?


Josiah: ALL OF THEM. Well, I should specify that every art form I
engage in has an impact on my writing. That includes books, movies/TV shows,
music, video games . . . There are art forms (e.g. dance, theater,
painting/drawing) that either don’t have any influence, or only a bit, but
maybe that’s because I don’t participate in these outlets. I couldn’t tell you
which one has the most power in my writing, but what I do know is that my
writing is indeed impact by the major forms of art I engage in.

Tracey: Soundtracks are a big favorite of yours, and I know that
asking you to pick a favorite is cruel of me . . . but tell us. What’s your
favorite soundtrack? (You can stab thank me later.)

Josiah: Ha. Ha. Ha. You just had to pull this one, did ya? I can’t
pick one favorite, because I’ll think of another and think to myself, “Oh yeah,
there’s that one, and that one, and that one . . .” Pretty soon, I’ll be saying
all of my soundtracks are my favorite.
But whenever I’m asked this question, one soundtrack often
comes to mind, so I’ll just use that one. If someone were to ask me what you
just did, I might be tempted to say that the Mad Max: Fury Road soundtrack (the
extended version of it) is my favorite. “Why?” you might be asking. Because
Junkie XL is a phenomenal composer, that’s why. You start off with lots of
intense or suspenseful sequences, filled with scratchy strings, pounding drums, and
eerie sounds I can’t properly describe. Then, out of the blue, an emotional
theme appears in the music. You’re hit with tracks that seem to be influenced
by classical music. Suddenly, this soundtrack is very different than what you
initially thought. It’s just so amazing! Hans Zimmer himself describes the
soundtrack as being “absolutely phenomenal and mind-blowingly brilliant.” Which
should tell you something about the Fury Road score.

Tracey: If you had a theme song that played whenever you walked into
a room, what would it be?
Josiah: I have legitimately thought about this beforehand, and all
my answers are goofy ones. Like, if I walked into a room and the Imperial March
started playing, or the Black Rider theme, I’d find that absolutely hilarious. But
if I were to seriously consider a theme, maybe Rohan’s theme? Or perhaps Ballad
of the Goddess from The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword. Ooh, there’s also the
LEGO Ninjago overture! So many to choose from, and I don’t which I’d pick. I would
probably change it . . . a lot.

Tracey: Who are some of your fictional heroes, and why?

Josiah: Obviously, the first one on this list is Captain America.
He’s such a patriotic hero who upholds his morals, and when he’s made a
decision, he’s determined to stick with it. He was one of the first superheroes
I saw in a movie, and I couldn’t help but love his character. I just don’t
understand people who think he’s lame. Obviously, such people don’t know a
great hero when they see one.
Another hero would be the Flash—as in, Grant Gustin’s
version. He strives to be a noble hero, but at the same time, he’s also very
human. He makes mistakes and doesn’t always admit it right away. He wrestles
with the punches life keeps throwing his way. I love the combination of
hero/human, because then I look up to him and identify with him. He’s a
relatable character, and that makes him awesome.
Finally, Charlie West from Andrew Klavan’s Homelanders
series is one of my heroes. He’s fiercely loyal to his country and will go
great lengths in his fight for it. He’s also got a family, friends, and a
girlfriend who he loves and wants to protect. I cheered for him throughout the
whole series. He has to be one of the most memorable protagonists I’ve read in
a book series. (I don’t know about you, but I’m detecting a theme here.)
Captain America // The Flash // Charlie West featured on the cover of The Last Thing I Remember by Andrew Klavan

Tracey: If you could spend a day with any character, yours or
someone else’s, who would it be? And what would your day together look like?

Josiah: Gah, this is so hard. I think I’m going to cheat and say I’d
love to hang out with the three main characters from my Portal Chronicles
books: Mark, David, and Warren. They would be so much fun to spend a day with!
We would probably do things like go watch a movie in theaters and then rave or
rant about it afterward; we’d play video games and probably do it loudly; we
would go to a cozy café, sit down with beverages, and just talk about life. Now
you’re making me wish I could actually do this. You wouldn’t happen to know how
to make book characters come to life, would you?

Tracey: You’re a very detailed movie-watcher. What things do you
look for or notice first in a movie?

I’ve never really thought about this. I guess one of the
things I notice is the music. Because I love soundtrack and am always on the
lookout for something new to listen to, I’ll pay attention to the movie’s
score. This, however, doesn’t happen all the time. There usually has to be
something that triggers it. One case of this is in Big Hero 6. During the chase
scene in San Fransokyo, the music changes from orchestral to electronic with
electric guitar. My ears perked up, and I decided to give the soundtrack a
listen.
San Fransokyo

There are other things I look for, such as an opening that
catches my attention, characters that I can feel emotional about, a gripping
plot, cool camera angles, realistic sets, et cetera. Like I said, I haven’t
even thought about this before. I suppose I’ll be paying more attention to that
now.

Tracey: You don’t hesitate to follow the advice, “Kill your
darlings.” Talk to us about character deaths—what is their value, how do you go
about it, what to avoid, etc.

Josiah: Ah, yes, I do tend to kill off a number of my characters. I
think they’re valuable because they heighten the emotion of the story, and
that’s our number one goal as writers: to give the readers an emotional
experience. Plus, there are other reasons for killing off a character.
Sometimes you need to raise the stakes and show the danger of what the
protagonists are doing. Other times, a villain’s demise is just satisfying.

The way I do deaths, if I want the readers to care, is to give
them plenty of reasons to become attached to said character. When readers love
characters, the scene of their death will be so much more powerful. There are
some character deaths where I do it “at a bad time,” if you will. If the
protagonists are at the crux of the plot, when things are getting darker and
hard, kill one of them off. Make things even more difficult for the others.

Another idea to do it is when there should be satisfaction,
like when a final battle has been won. Mortally wounding a character just at
the end increases the emotion. Or perhaps things are finally looking up for
your character; kill them, and your readers will become frustrated—in a good
way, of course. I’ll even give the villains a bit of humanity to spark even a
little bit of emotion from the readers.

However, here is my major precaution in character deaths: if
they’re supposed to matter, do not do
them just because.
See, when it’s a minor character, you can kill them off
easier because they don’t matter as much. But when it comes to major
protagonists, or even antagonists, tread carefully. Killing them off
willy-nilly doesn’t incite emotion in the reader if there’s no reason behind
it. I have to remind myself of that too sometimes. Whenever you’re debating
removing a character permanently, always ask yourself, “Do I have a sufficient
reason for doing this?”

I could give more advice, but this answer’s getting pretty
long. I guess I’ll just have to do a whole post on it sometime.

Tracey: If you couldn’t write, what would you do?

Josiah: I’d probably be a filmmaker. I would save up and get a nice
camera, establish a small crew, and make all sorts of movies. Even now, though
I am a writer, I wish I could pick it up as a smaller hobby. I think it’d be a
lot of fun to do.

Tracey: Quick—sort yourself! Which faction from Divergent?
Which race from Lord of the Rings? How soon would you die in The
Hunger Games
? Which Pevensie are you most like from The Chronicles of
Narnia
? (I’d ask you which Harry Potter house you’re in, but neither of us
has read it. #behindthetimes) (I took a quiz once, and I’m apparently
Gryffindor?)

Amity faction
Josiah: According to a test, I’m part of the Amity faction, but I
might prefer to choose Dauntless. I’d either be an Elf or a Skin-Changer. I’d
like to think I would win, but realistically, I’d probably die somewhere in the
middle. Eh, probably Edmund, after he’s done the whole betrayal thing. (I did
the HP house quiz, and I’m fairly equal in all the houses, which means I can
choose my own. Yay . . .?)

Well, thanks for allowing me on your blog, Tracey! I had a
lot of fun with this interview.

Tracey: So did I! Thanks for stopping by, bro! To all my fellow adventurers, head on over to The Steadfast Pen to read Josiah’s very first post. Hint: if you like pizza, you’ll get along just fine. Feel free to leave him some comments, here or there (or both!). I think I can persuade him to loiter around my comment section and chat with y’all. 😉