Just popping in to say a few things:
1. The Great Beast of Homework swallowed me whole and this is as much of a post you’ll be getting this weekend.
2. Yes, it is very sad. Please cry many tears.
3. Actually, don’t. There’s no time to mop up the mess!
4. But the good news is there’s a special post coming up in the middle of next week! Stay tuned for that!!!
5. In the meantime, tell me how your week was!
Welcome to the first Subplots and Storylines post of 2018! How was your January, questers? Mine was rather full, and I’m about ready to take a nap. Or hibernate until spring. Someone build me an igloo and bring me a stack of fuzzy quilts, please.
So what happened to make January so busy? The third semester of college, that’s what. I had five projects on my plate for the majority of month. Now it’s down to three. Most of them are/were group work, which is good in the sense that the load is divided among several brains . . . but not so good in the sense that it’s harder to juggle everyone’s schedules and actually make progress. (Also I am Batman when I get grumpy. I prefer to work alone. Group projects are meant to make me patient, I suppose.)
I shouldn’t complain, though! After all, getting into college this year in the first place was an answer to prayer, and this is all part of getting me where I want to go.
Aside from homework and school and my job, there wasn’t really much else going on. Three bright spots in the month were moments spent with friends–coffee and a heart-to-heart with one local friend, a long-distance phone call with another friend (whom I didn’t get to see over Christmas holidays), and Skype with a pal in Oxford!
Oh, and tell me–was your January as frigid as mine? There were a couple of days in which spring seemed to be whispering in my ear, but the rest of it was blustery and often thirty below with the wind-chill (in Celsius, mind you). Usually I don’t want winter to end until I’ve gone sledding or ice-skating at least once, but this year I haven’t done either and yet I’m still ready for spring to arrive.
Yes indeed, I kept plugging steadily through my two favorite TV shows–well, the only shows I currently watch, but you know. I rewatched more of Once Upon a Time season 3, started Once Upon a Time season 6 (eeep!), and also continued watching The Flash season 3 (which I really, really, really need to discuss here on the blog someday).
Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Men Tell No Tales
I saw this way back near the beginning of the month, and although I’ve forgotten some things already, I did enjoy it! Aside from a few unnecessarily inappropriate jokes and a characteristically rambling plot, it was a fun high-seas adventure. Jack is back, ever his charming, stumbling, selfish self. Henry Turner was a great addition, I thought–and at some angles he almost reminded me of my own character, Prince Hadrian, except with longer hair. Carina was a bit of your stereotypical “I’m a lady intellectual in a sexist world; step aside, please” kind of character, but it was still fun to have a spitfire young woman in the story–especially towards the end. Even if you’re wary of watching the latest film in this looooong running franchise . . . do it for the bank robbery scene at the beginning. You can thank me later.
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The Bourne Identity
Can you believe this was my first time watching a Bourne movie?! (And can you believe how young Matt Damon looked in 2002?) I’m a sucker for amnesia stories, so a movie about a man waking up with a tracker embedded in his skin and seven different passports bearing his picture, yet no memory of his past at all–that was super intriguing. All the getaways, fistfights, adrenaline, and unspoken character development were awesome! I loved the scene with the sniper in the field, for some reason. Considering the genre, there was less objectionable content than I expected, so yep, I’ll be watching the rest of the movies! Probably reading the books too.
I read only two novels this month, but both of them were good, so I’m satisfied.
Raising Dragons // Bryan Davis
One special reading goal I have this year is to reread the twelve Dragons in Our Midst/Oracles of Fire/Children of the Bard books, so book one of DIOM was obviously top of the list. I first read Raising Dragons at the age of twelve, and I think this was my fourth time going through it! My favorite scene still is, and always has been, when Billy and Bonnie are taking shelter in the woods for the night in chapter 13. (“Forever and ever, Bonnie. I will always be your friend.”)
Rereading this was like returning to old pals. Cozy and familiar. Some scenes I knew nearly by heart, and other details I’d forgotten (such as Professor’s crazy driving). And while I had to smile at some minor headhopping and cheesy lines, it was really neat to see just how far Bryan Davis’s craft has come since his first novel! Despite the minor flaws, a heart pulsing with dragonfire still shines through this story, and I’m looking forward to picking up The Candlestone this month. 5 stars!
Siren’s Fury // Mary Weber
Wow, this one was a few shades darker than the first book! With more of a steampunk flair injected into the fantasy world, most of the story takes place on board an airship or within the metal castle walls of an industrialized city.
Nym undergoes yet another dramatic sweep in her character arc. There were moments I just didn’t like her, but I was both fascinated and hopeful enough to wait for redemption. And it was very interesting to see how she reacted to a severe setback (okay, more like a hundred setbacks, poor girl) that affected her on a personal level. I wish I could be more specific, but I don’t want to spoil anything!
Thanks to the cliffhanger ending of the first book–and what that ending entailed for the second book–there was less of the sappy romance. Not nearly as much emphasis on the love interest smelling like “pine and honey and sunshine” and having “jagged bangs” and muscles and being the idealistic YA fiction boyfriend. (I realize this is part and parcel of most YA fantasy romance plots, but I seem to be less patient with that sort of thing the older I get.) Anyway! There was less of that, and a bit more of a focus on the actual relationship . . . well, as much focus as there could be, given the circumstances. I’d better stop talking or I’ll give stuff away.
A couple of other things I enjoyed: Princess Rasha gets much more developed, and I discovered I liked having her around. Myles is still despicable, but he also got a lot more page time. Again, I found that more fascinating than annoying (because don’t we love having characters to hate?).
Also, can somebody please kill the villain soon. Yesterday would’ve been good.
I was thinking of giving the book 4 stars, but that deep ending bumped it up to 5 stars!
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Digital Pulse // Josiah Dyck @ The Steadfast Pen
Yes, I said I read two books this month. And yes, I do know how to count. This was kind of an unofficial read since a) I don’t really include beta reading in my totals because it usually sits on the fence between editing and pleasure reading, and b) this is a novella.
It’s my brother’s entry for Rooglewood Press’s Five Poisoned Apples contest, actually, and I think it might be one of his strongest stories to date! A futuristic superhero spin on Snow White was a lot of fun. If you like brooding heroes, cyborgs, and bubbly AI units, you’d better hope this one wins a spot in the anthology!
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Nothing to report here.
As I mentioned in this post, I’ve given myself the freedom during the remainder of this semester to not rabidly pursue any writing goals. Yes, I already miss the flow of words, but I’m also relieved–because January held approximately zero minutes to give to any of my WIPs. So I’m on a semi-hiatus right now. But hopefully homework will slow down enough that I can organize the beta feedback on The Brightest Thread soon. (I recently received some unexpected critiques on the first few chapters, which is going to be so helpful when I finally get to edit this book in summer! You know who you are–thank you!)
It’s not precisely writing-related, but my brother did read my Snow White novella, Mirrors Never Lie, this month. And surprise! He put together a playlist for me! He’s the soundtrack aficionado in our house, and his superpower is matching songs to stories that he (and others) write. I was delighted! This playlist includes mostly instrumental pieces, but also two lyrical songs that fit my main characters quite well: Face It by NF, and I Won’t Let You Go by Switchfoot. If you want a glimpse of the themes of Mirrors Never Lie–or just want to hear two really stirring songs–give these a listen!
I’m glad January is over. Not that it was a bad month, but I’m ready to keep moving forward. Midterm exams start at the end of February, so I foresee some studying in the future, but hopefully there will be time for books, editing prep, and good memories in between!
Brains are busy places, you know. Many things go humming through them, here and there, to and fro, and so it stands to reason that occasionally brains suffer traffic jams. And sometimes brains with too many thoughts to think don’t have room to squeeze in one more, and so, occasionally, at times, now and then, it is necessary to choose a simple topic to blog about.
Which is my roundabout way of saying that my pal Madeline J. Rose @ Short and Snappy invented another tag this week! And because my brain is busy sorting out some traffic jams, this tag is just the thing to make sure Adventure Awaits doesn’t sit cold and forgotten today.
What is a comp title, you ask? It’s short for comparison title–you know, when authors, reviewers, and moviemakers throw other names around to try to describe their own creations. Here are some of Madeline’s tips for comp titles (paraphrased):
And the challenge’s guidelines:
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The Brightest Thread // Tales of Goldstone Wood meets Diana Wynne Jones meets the Auralia Thread
Tales of Goldstone Wood series by Anne Elisabeth Stengl: rich fantasy world and lyrical writing style. The latest book, Golden Daughter, works particularly well as a comp title because of the dream world stuff. Diana Wynne Jones: the bits of humor (I’ve only read Howl’s Moving Castle, but still). The Auralia Thread series by Jeffrey Overstreet: the allegory and some of the political subplots.
The Prophet’s Quest // Raising Dragons meets Narnia meets The Door Within
So this was my first novel ever, and thinking up comp titles was incredibly easy since my work was heavily influenced by a few certain books. Raising Dragons by Bryan Davis: his human/dragon offspring characters are a lot like my characters turning into dragons. Narnia: hello, new fantasy world! The Door Within by Wayne Thomas Batson: my Captain Dauntless (in charge of the dragon army) sounds an awful lot like Captain Valithor, a general who likes to SHOUT INSULTS IN ALL CAPS.
The Prophet’s Key // Narnia meets Mission Impossible meets Storm Siren meets the Dragonkeeper Chronicles
Yes, I am aware that sounds like a strange combination. Narnia: again, there is a world besides our own. Mission Impossible: only because there are chase scenes in various parts of our world, not because of any spy missions or gadgetry. Storm Siren by Mary Weber: elementals. And the Dragonkeeper Chronicles by Donita K. Paul: because Wizard Fenworth was a big inspiration for my crazy wind Shifter named Wimwhile.
Mirrors Never Lie // How to Train Your Dragon meets A Time to Die
HTTYD (the movie): Viking/Norse elements. A Time to Die by Nadine Brandes: solely for the intensity of the main character’s inner journey. I suppose I could throw Snow White in there with the other titles, but being a Snow White retelling, that should be obvious.
Blood Rose // Illusionarium meets . . . something medical?
Illusionarium by Heather Dixon: No steampunkiness here, but the plague in that book reminds me ever so slightly of the medical aspect of my story. I really can’t think of any comp titles that fit this Beauty and the Beast retelling. It’s modern day, takes place solely between two characters in a mansion in the woods, and has a light touch of sci-fi/fantasy/something. If songs work as comp titles, I would readily say Salvation by Skillet!
The Glass Girl // Gail Carson Levine meets Dragon Slippers
For this Cinderella retelling, I’m not entirely happy with these comp titles either. Gail Carson Levine: simple, sweet fairy tales. Dragon Slippers by Jessica Day George: something about the medieval city setting reminds me of my story.
Welcome to Absurdity // Eyes Wide Open meets The Dark Unwinding meets Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Children
You guys have no idea how excited I am to start this novel one day! The idea has been stewing in my head for years. Eyes Wide Open by Ted Dekker: unsuspecting allegory and a mental asylum. The Dark Unwinding by Sharon Cameron: the aesthetic. I don’t know how else to say it–it’s just the feel of the setting, despite being the wrong time era. Miss Peregrine’s Home for Peculiar Children by Ransom Riggs: unusual characters and creepiness. (Man, I really want to start writing this someday soon . . .)
Untitled // Indiana Jones meets Ranger’s Apprentice
Indiana Jones: artefacts and tombs and traps. Ranger’s Apprentice series by John Flanagan: good ol’ high fantasy and weapons and rollicking adventures. I just really feel like a fantasy Indy would be a ton of fun to write about.
This new year is something I’ve been thinking about a lot. Not just in terms of goals and resolutions, but in terms of where my heart is and what lies on the horizon. And it’s finally time to catch some of those whirring, buzzing, humming fragments of thoughts. Time to string them together into something to share with you, because I’m a firm believer in the strength we can find in each other’s journeys. I wouldn’t blog if I didn’t think that somehow, some way, the tangling threads of our stories matter to each other.
Last January, I set some lofty goals, writing-wise. (You can see them in detail HERE, if you’re so inclined.) Another thing in which I am a believer is the value of looking forward to set goals, and looking back to see how far you’ve come. So before we look ahead, let’s pause and turn around for a moment.
Finish the first draft of The Prophet’s Key. Nope. Didn’t make it. But I added 17,000 words to the rewrite I’d started in 2016, bringing the total word count up to 100k. I ground to a halt there, realizing just how bloated and huge the story was becoming. A course correction was needed, but at that point, leadership college was ramping up like crazy and I decided to put the project aside.
Began expanding The Brightest Thread into a novel. Check!
Go to Realm Makers. Another check! That was an incredible dream come true, one I hope to see come true again this summer.
Write, edit, and submit a story for Rooglewood Press’s contest. Surprisingly, check again. Mirrors Never Lie is on some judge’s desk right now, I imagine.
Complete the first draft of The Brightest Thread and do a round or two of edits so that it’s poised to move forward (aka maybe get published) in 2018. First draft–check. A round or two-ish of edits earns another check. And is the novel “poised to move forward” now? I’d say it’s poised to move into another round of edits, that’s for sure, and then . . . well, we’ll get to that in a minute.
Finish The Creative Way writing course by Ted Dekker. Um . . . no. This kept getting pushed back due to one reason or another, and I still have a handful of lessons to complete.
Possibly begin querying agents for TBT. I dipped my toes in the water by pitching it at the Realm Makers conference, but subsequently sent it to beta readers, knowing the novel needed more work. So querying didn’t happen last year.
